Die Versteckt Tür (The Hidden Door)

[ISeeTooClear]

Die Versteckt Tür (The Hidden Door)

Long ago there was a secret tale that toon mothers would tell their toon children to keep them in doors during the dark night. It was about a small cat who had wondered out during night to see the stars even though her mother forbade her afraid the cogs would capture her. The small cat crept out silently that night like a spy... So sure that she could take on whatever could come at her... However, the cat was wrong... During that night she had found a door near the factories and opened it. Revealing the most dreadful of dreadful things possible... This cat never returned. Believing the story... Cookie has convinced herself that this old legend is true... That it is a part of toon history that no one else has been able to find. Cookie needs help revealing these truths.

About the Author of this Lovely Book <3

So my name is Roxy <3 or at least that is one of my toon names... :3 I used to write stories on another forum and I'm known for writing it in a weird way. I like to include actual real other toons in the story, or even you. Just give me a name that you want in the story and a description of your toon. (it must be a toon)... It CAN be a fake toon... But it's a lot more fun if it's one of your toons. It can be one of your real toons using your usernames.. But in the past I've always had real toons.

On the other forum that I used to write these stories on... These are their statistics. And I've definately improved over the years since I've been through 3 grades in English class since then. XD

But here they are(in order of being written):
Titanic - 122 Replies - 1,160 views
Aboard the Carpathia (Sequal to Titanic) - 80 replies - 1,318 views
Toon Wishes - 276 replies - 4,022 views
Toon Wishes 2 - 182 replies - 2,777 views <- this was never finished

So, :D A lot of people like to get involved in my story writing and I upload chapters usually every so on- especially when people demand it.

So basically you get the ordeal! :D

Have I interested you? ;D Want to join my story?
Here's the form:
Toon Name:
Species:
Color(s):
Height(s):
Further Description:
Personality:
Other:

- Characters -

Kris P. Cookie - black cat - ISeeTooClear: The toon telling the story.
Kris P. Kitty - black cat - Giggletoes: The mother of the toon; more than she appears and more understanding.
Midnight Prowler - black cat - Sandy: The best friend who appears to be the only believing toon of Cookie.
Comet - black cat -summer: The loving snappy cat
Queen Comet Pinkertooth -pink bunny - summerfest: The slow helpful bunny
Galaxy Dark Dragon -mixed blue dog - Clara<3[/b]: The flamboyant dog.

Summer Sunlight -yellow cat - Summer Sunlight: the humble intelligent cat.
Sparky -yellow dog - Sparky: the demanding pup
Princess Violet-pink kitten - Princess Violet: the predictive unlucky but understanding kitten
Straw-Beary-red bear - Summer Sunlight: kind helpful bear.
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- Content -

[COLOR=#800080]To be continued ;D

[ISeeTooClear]

Prologue

Schwooooo... Her hands hovered over the silver door knob carefully... Almost as if they were questioning whether or not to take the chance and open the door only to reveal the darkest secrets of Toontown yet. Her heart pitter-pattered like raindrops indicating that the oil black cat was afraid. Afraid of what she would find.

She had known better than to sneak out at night... And worst of all begin playing in the Sellbot factories of Toontown... She had only dared go there because they were weaker than the other cogs... Much easier to get past security. Every night she had seen the door as she had gone to gather cog parts... She knew it would have been easier to grab them in the day with help. But she wanted to prove to her school that she was strong enough to skip a grade- she was strong enough to take them by herself.

Every night this door had irked her... Grabbed her by her ears, tickled her chin, gripped at her mind.... Told her to go forward... To grab for that door knob- and maybe she didn't have to go inside. Maybe just take a peek... See what was behind the door... Just by the turn of the skeptical knob. It had wanted her to come to it... The door was not there during the day.

The darkness of the night in sellbot factory- the magical works of the doors had put it together every night. Telling her she was the one to discover what was behind the door.

She lurched forward... Grabbing the knob... Her white gloves soaked in nervouseness... What if she didn't like what was behind the door knob? What if what was behind it... was scary? What if... Other toons had found this door and never returned?

IMPOSSIBLE! Her mind screeched at her... She was the only one who had dared venture out at night. There were no toons missing in toon town... She would know... She would know, right? How would she know if nobody- she stopped herself, shaking her head.

Her wrist began turning the knob for her... Her eyes- her heart- her mind... giving up to the pull of its magicalness... Suddenly... The darkness grabbed her.

[Giggletoes]

I will join your story! you know my toons, so just choose whichever one you like. :D

[Sandy]

Toon Name: Midnight Prowler
Species: Cat
Color(s): Black
Height(s): Tiny
Further Description: Extremely cautious.
Personality: Curious , Helpful
Other: I love adventures

[ISeeTooClear]

Chapter 1: The Epiphany


Huhhhh! It filled my lungs with air almost as if my body was drowning inside of a river. Knowing it all too well, my stomache did a flip flop... Laying my head back into the stuffing soft pillows of my banana split bead. My mom knew me well enough to give me a candy room for my sixtoonth birthday.

Sighing, my body pulled itself out from underneath the covers for me to sit in wonder at the reoccuring dream. It was a sign... A sign that I had believed in for so long, yet refused to persue. But somewhere inside me, knowing the time was near, my mind warned me struggeling.

It was never a legend to me. Maybe I had just never wanted it to be. My mom, Kris P. Kitty always brushed it off by saying if it were true... Somebody would have gone after it all these cattelog years ago. I wanted to believe her, but I couldn't. The facts were right in front of my very own eyes.

No one ever ventured out during night time (except in Donald's Dreamland of course), and that was all because of this very legend. So how could anyone knew? Everyone always wanted to brush it off with little feathers to tickle themselves silly... Not me... I had gathered all the laff points I could at my sixtoonth birthday. Yet, my very own school only let me stay studying in university.

Shoving thousands of cog toontasks to tell me I still needed more strength... Tasks that would take forever to finish. But I had gotten my strength up enough, and I knew I was ready... I was ready for a fight... No, not a fight. I was ready... to reveal... the hidden door.

"Cookie!" her voice rang irratably in my ears, telling me that it was time for me to rise. Time for me to go to university... Where she was still at... That was the thing about toons... You stayed at university until you could gain every measly laff point... Then, after that... You gained a job at headquarters (where you get even your training tasks) to do the same thing over and over again.

"Yes, mother?" sighing, my voice let out a yawn. Studying the night before, I had not gotten very much sleep... The nightmare didn't help either.

"Time to get ready for school, I won't repeat myself." she meowed. I sighed once again in a small protest but got ready. I had my jet pack on, a small compartment filled with endless gags I would use today to do the same thing... Filled with anything I needed.

"I know you hate this sweety." she appeared in my door way... Her skeletal pirate hat on, and much overused skeletal costume that she used for Halloween every year. She loved fighting blood suckers. It looked almost real on her tall body... We were black cats after all. "But I promise, it will be for your own good... Maybe at this rate, you can work at Headquarters one day, and be the heads of the operation. You went so early to fight the vice president and the CFO."

I stared blankly at her, refusing these things. Headquarters was full of secrets, almost as many secrets as the door. Almost... Almost... Maybe more... Maybe Headquarters had made up that lie about her. I shook my head, almost pushing the very idea of it out of my mind.

Headquarters would never do that. Headquarters... were the friends?

I sighed, "I got it, I got it..." I meowed repeatedly, turning my attention back to her. "I'm gonna go now... Midnight is waiting for me."

My mom smiled almost weakly at me, and kissed my head, and let me go. I opened the door seeing my friend.

Midnight was a black cat just like me, she was tiny like me, a little shorter... maybe. But don't tell her that. She was my best friend. The one I told everything too and didn't have to worry about her telling me it's not true... Warning, she did that a lot. That was for sure. She smiled at me, waving friendly. I smiled back, running over to her as we started our path towards university. Midnight Prowler (her full name), was a little bit older than me... Considering I was very young for Tooniversity. One of the most elite schools that Toontown offered... However, our age didn't matter, we were still friends no matter what.

It was like yesterday... The opening ceremony... She was a freshman there too. She helped me and almost got lost with me in those halls on our very first day. After that... we became friends. It was usually like that... Species usually stuck together seperately.

Especially black cats... We were unique.. Blessed by the moon in Donald's Dreamland on Hallow's Eve. That's how black cats were born. And supposedly that was a legend true... But it never fails to be true.

"I had that same dream again, Midnight." I finally broke our cheery silence.

"...The one about the door?" she asked, eyes full of curiosity.

"Yeah... This time, I had actually opened the door." I met her gaze, unwavering in its exsitance.

"What was inside?" the more the questions came, the more she dared to ask. She believed me... She was just afraid as I was... Not as much, seeing as how she did not share the visions I saw. But she understood. She understood more than anyone else would listen.

"Darkness." I meowed.

She smiled weakly, "I think there's more than that... Maybe you just weren't ready to see yet."

After a moment, I nodded silently, smiling again. She always made things easier. "Maybe." We met eyes, and started racing to Tooniversity.

Little had we known, that was only the beginning. The beginning of something bigger than us...

...Bigger than Toontown...

[Sandy]

I am curious as to what will happen next...
I can't sleep till I know!
:help:

[ISeeTooClear]

Chater 2: The Realization

Gasping for breathes of oxygen we laughed amongst each other. We didn't care what the other toons thought of us, around us... They didn't matter. Nothing really mattered except for Sandy and I.

My breathing stopped when I saw the Professer running out of Tooniversity yelling for everyone that there was a cog invasion... Only this time... There were more than we had expected. I just realized that on our way here... Everything had been DA Offices... Everything had been taken over by cogs... Mom! my heart stopped.

"We need all toons to report to the trolleys to help take care of sad and injured toons! Anybody that has even been trained a little on their toon up gags! Toons that do not have a toon up gag track and that are above 70 laff points need to report to headquarters so that they can find out instructions to enter the battlefeld. Toons that are 70 laff or lower need to stay inside the playground to help keep barriers up and let only toons into the playgrounds." the Professor called out. "Toontown is being taken over!"

Midnight rushed forward to speak to the professor, "How did this happen so quickly?!" She yowled to him. "We have just walked from our estates!"

"It seems that overnight or for a long time now... whatever the case... The cogs have been showing us a lie. No matter how much we have fought bosses... Somewhere... They have been preparing for thsi day." he shook his head, almost in disbelief of what he was saying.

"It's... It's the door!" I yelled out. Toons stopped to listen to our conversation.

The professor thought for a moment thoughtfully, "Actually... I hate to say this... Even though I have rejected your belief in the legond... You may be correct." he sighed.

"I want permission to take this to headquarters... That way I can gather toons... We need to head to Chip & Dale's... We need to open the door. That tunnel... That door needs to be explored." I was so ready for this, this was the day I was dreaming of.

"Go Cookie! Midnight, go with her!" the Professor commanded.

Midnight didn't need to be told to follow, she would follow me. Midnight was my best friend. I knew I was ready. I had been ready a long time. We rushed over to the headquarters... Toons slowly watched us, some began following behind. They were just as interested as we were.

All of those years of laughter at my beliefs... I was correct. But still, it ached at my gut. Hopefully... My mom would be at headquarters... Please be there mom. I had eyed the pond as we went... She did not stand there. Thank goodness. So the only place safe left was at the Major Headquarters in Toontown central.

Please be safe.

[Tinsel N Glitter]

Great story!!! I want to hear more!! :bravo:

[ISeeTooClear]

Please join! I need more characters :)

[Tinsel N Glitter]

Toon Name: Comet
Species: Cat
Color(s): black
Height(s): small medium?
Further Description: Loves being a small toon, feels pretty
Personality: loving with an attitude
Other: CEO lover

Or

Toon Name: Queen Comet Pinkertooth aka Queen
Species:bunny
Color(s):pink
Height(s):medium
Further Description: lure queen
Personality: slow moving
Other:

[Root Bear12]

Ill join the story!!


Toon Name: Galaxy Dark Dragon
Species: Dog
Color(s): Different shades of blue
Height(s): Medium
Further Description: Loves flying, Loves breathing fire,
Other: Mean, loves advetures always searching for other dragons.

[Sandy]

This is going to be interesting.I love the story and check
back to see if it continued. They say," Curiosity killed the cat."
I need be less curious.
O_o

[Root Bear12]

this is going to be interesting.i love the story and check

back to see if it continued. They say," curiosity killed the cat."
i need be less curious.

o_o





rofl!!!

[ISeeTooClear]

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Chapter 3: The Assembeling

plat, plat, plat... our paws hit the green grass as we raced up to the stairs, both of us rushing through the HQ's doors. Many toons had passed through here, I had when I was brand new... I remember the first time. Everyone lived in Welcome Valley. And once you reached around ten years old you were able to run to HQ to get your welcoming papers to begin school at the not far away school house.

Everyone began this way, and you would even recieve your first training papers from Flippy. I remember how exciting I had been... It hadn't taken long for me to get my first gag in the toon up track. As well as it hadn't taken long to graduate to begin with. I had been the youngest toon ever to do these things...

My heart raced as we entered... Please mom, be in here. Midnight, who was at my side peered over me. She was extremely petite as she put her hand on my shoulder, which soothed me as I refrained to laugh at her height. My eyes were wide as I viewed over the number of toons who were gathered here.

"Cookie!" I heard a familar voice rush closely to me. My head turned as my oxygen rushed out in a sigh of relief. "Thank goodness you are okay! Welcome Valley is in ruins!" she cried pulling me to a hug. She patted Midnight on the head seeing that she was safe as well.

"Mom, I have permission from the Professor to run a party over to Chip & Dale's to search the tunnel that leads to the door." as my words had come out, her eyes revealed shock, but soon unclouded with understanding.

"You may have been right this entire time, Cookie... I'm going with you." she meowed, and I nodded. I needed her, she was just as well trained.. Even better than me and she had a longer history from experience as me.

The three of us had walked up to the lead officer who I quickly explained the details too. Not long after.. The mayor himself appeared. "We do need to explore this, and your search party is granted, Miss Cookie..." his voice trailed on, and nervousness crept up the insides of me. "But, I doubt you will have enough willing toons to bring along with you, and those that will I am afraid will be younger... Because of the ridiculousness of it-"

He was cut off by Midnight who surprisingly cut in quickly, "Can we just announce it? Isn't it your job, Mayor, to assure us and help us?" she arched her eyebrow.

Flippy stood silently and only nodded. Midnight pushed me forward towards the crowd who I just now realized had already started on focusing in on me. I gulped quite loudly- more than expected. I fumbled with words for a moment before courage filled me, "M-my fellow toons," I stumbled, shaking my head to get the nervouseness away. "I am leading a search party with my other allies..." I gestured to Kitty and Midnight. "To the mysterious tunnel in Chip & Dale's that leads to the mysterious door... Not only have we been guestimating that this may be the key cause to the take over of Toontown, but the Proffesor and even headquarters as well as our own mayor has agreed and given permission to follow out with this duty. We needs toons to join our cause... And enter battle to search this. We need well trained toons at least over 80 laff points... More than four gag tracks... Who are able to join our cause. You don't even need full experience. Just... Please join us."

I doubt my speech was award winning.. It wasn't even great. I had never been able to speak in class. No one would ever take me seriously seeing as how old I was... They only were surprised or jealous that I had come so far at such a young age.

I felt defeated as toons only laughed realizing that I was speaking about the old legend, and arguement entered seeing as how the government had gone to bat's brains.

But slowly around three hands raised... It would be enough to at least send out a patrol. I smiled happily as the toons came. A black cat, a pink bunny, and a mixed blue dog stepped forward.

The cat looked us up and down, "This should work out well... Seeing as how we black cat's are often discriminated against." she smiled. "We will get along well, the name's Comet."

The pink bunny curtsied, "You can call me Queen."

The mixed blue dog smiled, "Call me, Galaxy!"

I think we can do it... We can overcome any challenges. They were perfect. They were full of a spark I couldn't describe... They were brave like us. Even if we were a small group. We could do it... Right?

[Tinsel N Glitter]

I love it! More, I want to hear more!

[Root Bear12]

Love it! :D

[Summer Sunlight]

Is it too late to sign up? If not, this is my signup.


Toon Name: Summer Sunlight
Species: Cat
Color(s): Yellow
Height(s): Tall
Further Description: (custom) Purple dress with cream diagonal stripes on it with lace trim.
Personality: Outgoing, talkative, urgent, smart, caring.
Other: If it has something to do with helping friends, she jumps right in.

[Sparky]

Toon Name: Sparky
Species: Dog
Color(s): Yellow
Height(s): Tall
Further Description: Demanding, he wants everything to go his way.
Other: The description kinda says it all.:tongue2:

[Sandy]

I can't wait to start on our quest.
I am anxious to see what will happen next,
yet I wonder what awaits us at the end of the tunnel.

[Kajuking]

Omg! I love the story! You've got me hooked!

[Princess Violet]

:D I love your stories!

Toon name: Princess Violet
Species: Cat
Color: Pink
Height: medium legs, long body
Further Description: Often in the middle of trouble through no fault of her own, solver of problems, very smart, understanding, danger and/or disaster seems to follow in her footsteps, makes friends easily, very connected with nature and "In tune", very respectful of wild animals and believes in ghosts though is not afraid of them, believes in 'forest spirits' and can predict weather days in advance just by looking outside, would always rather be indoors than out
Other: (sometimes) has a short fuse temper, gets angry when people don't listen to her, wears white <nobr>shutter shades (http://www.theguildv2.com/forums/showthread.php?p=46254#)</nobr>, a lavender <nobr>jean skirt (http://www.theguildv2.com/forums/showthread.php?p=46254#)</nobr>, navy fireworks shirt with lavender trim and <nobr>black converse (http://www.theguildv2.com/forums/showthread.php?p=46254#)</nobr> at all times

[Summer Sunlight]

Is it too late to sign up? If not, here.

Toon Name: Straw-Beary
Species: Bear
Color(s): All Red
Height(s): Tallest
Further Description: She has a tuft of fur on her head that goes over one of her eyes and she wears contacts.
Personality: Smart, kind, helpful, small voice.
Other: I dunno LAWL

[ISeeTooClear]

Yes, it is still open! Sorry, I totally had actually forgotten about this story. But I'll start it back up again. :) And try to keep posting in it.

[ISeeTooClear]

Chapter 4: The Destined
As quickly as my fears arose of being a small group, some toons stepped forward in a crowd. I took a step back, overwhelmed by the attention. "Is it too late to join?" a yellow cat stepped forward.

"Yeah, is it too l-" a pink kitten tripped forward falling on her belly.

Taken aback, I went to help her before a red bear bent over and helped the pink kitten up. "I might as well join too, don't want anyone to be hurt." the bear smiled calmy.

"I better be allowed to join this shindig." a yellow dog crossed his arms, "We haven't got all day, black cat, tell us if we're allowed to join or not." the dog arched his eyebrow.

Midnight looked at me, slightly amused at the number of toons who wanted to join. I looked at the eyes that were now all on me, "Well, yeah, anyone is allowed to join as long as you are strong enough to-"

"We are strong enough." the dog interrupted. "So, now what? You're the leader, tell us what to do."

"I got it, I got it." I stepped foreward. I thought through what needed to be done and surveyed the options. We obviously had toons who were experienced, I had actually seen a lot of them doing tasks. Usually I worked separetely however, unless with Midnight... I wasn't used to having to tell people what to do, or even being in a team for that matter.

"First of all, I'd like to disperse powers to everyone." the idea in my head popped up, "Straw-Beary, right? I've seen you before. You are often good at healing people, so you're in charge of making sure that if we run into any cogs that everyone is good on their laff points." I pointed at the bear who nodded with no objection.

"Midnight, you're best at making sure that everyone is happy with what we're doing," I looked at the dog for a split second and then back to her, "You're definately best to be the toon person of this operation."

"Comet and yellow-" I looked at the two, but the dog interrupted.

"The name is Sparky." he made sure I knew. Figures, Come and Sparky are both eletrified names.

"Yes, Comet and Sparky." I made sure to enunciate his name perfectly. "You guys are definately probably some of the best to be at the front of batteling cogs."

"Mom and Violet." I already knew Violet's name as well, Violet was quite the talk of the town- known for being unlucky but always had been made up for her power to predict things, "You guys are best at surveying things. You'll have the best opinions on what moves we should make."

"Summer you are another good healer, so you can help with Straw-Beary." I meowed.

"As for you Galaxy, you are another good choice for battle. Me and you will help Sparky and Comet." I finished.

"This still doesn't explain what we're gonna do." the dog pointed at me. He was right.

"We need to go make sure we have enough supplies and map out what we're going to do." I meowed, "Let's head to Goofy's and then we're going to the library."

"Why the library?" Comet snapped, "Reading through tales isn't going to help us." Even Midnight was looking at me questioningly.

"Actually, it just might. We need a better map of Chip and Dale's, it isn't exactly included on its playground map. And we need to find out all the stuff we can about the door..." I meowed, "We don't have a lot of time, so our first objective is to grab a map including the door, and grab any books we have and read them along the way. It's going to be a long journey. Chip and Dale's is atleast two playgrounds away and that's not including the stops or obstacles along the way."

Nobody objected to that, it was well thought out, if I thought so myself.

Well, that's just a thought....